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Happy St Patricks Day :)

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Some clovers for the occasion.

I made a quick modification here > St Patricks Day Sketchiness by JCoolArts
But I don't like it as much.
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Make
Canon
Model
Canon MG5400 series
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This is very well done. The proportions are great and the shading helps the shape of the clovers to stand out. I like the small flower added to the clover, although that isn't what a clover flower looks like...it kind of looks like a buttercup.

My suggestion would be increasing the contrast beween the background and the subject. The lightest parts of the drawing blend in with the background, and keeps the clovers from standing out as much as they could. Also more color variation between greens would give it a brighter appearance. These are things I would do, but your style is different. Over all, I think you did well.